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| Posted: 22 Feb 2007 04:10 | ||
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i'm feelin all weak, wots wrong wit me
I fink ive gone blind, i cant see how much av i ad, the rooms spinin i feel a bit sick, but i'm still winnin there's someone talkin to me, wat shud i say i fink im fallin over, fuck dont fall that way im tyin to say sorry, fuck i cant speak i'm fallin again, anuva blokes callin me a freek yeah fuck you man!shit now he's walkin ova to me what can do, i cant see properly he raises his hand, punches me in the face i fall over, my hearts a triple pace i open my eyes, he's raisin his foot fuck dat, am guna keep dem shut usin his foot he hits me in the head haves a rest the grabs hold of my leg drags me down a nearby alleyway forts runnin fru ma head. am i guna die today later on he's beatin me,but i' startin to come round now dats blood splat, a fuckin clear sound i open my eyes again but its a diffrent person, you not th one hitin me before, fuckin hell man ma heads hurtin der goin thu ma pocket, goin fa ma wallet, but i'm too fucked to stop it theres foot steps goin away from me there leavin, finally i still cant get up i shud av kept ma mouth shut i'm still bleadin, i cant get off the floor ma heads killin, dats guna be sore im tryin to sit up, tryin ta get off ma back but am feelin realy dizzy, nd every fings gone black. tell me wat u fink, out of 10 __________________ usin lyrics like a knife,
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| Posted: 22 Feb 2007 23:57 | ||
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7 i think u could swich it up and make it flow better. But im no producer just my opinion.
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| Posted: 23 Feb 2007 11:49 | ||
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| yh yh id give it a 7. | ||
| Posted: 23 Feb 2007 20:03 | ||
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yh thanks a was finkin dat ma sel but a wanted a seccond opinion __________________ usin lyrics like a knife,
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| Posted: 23 Feb 2007 20:35 | ||
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yeah have to agree a 7. wicked. standard.
M Dot Girl __________________ on that shit from early, roll wid boys but im straight up girlie!!! |
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| Posted: 04 Mar 2007 18:18 | ||
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