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| Posted: 10 Jan 2008 17:25 | ||
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I tried many times to sit and rap and/ nuffin happend/ is it coz i'm whack not black or a rapper/ put the pen down with a frown coz i'm angry/ one day one thing will make a man of me/ picked the pen up and myself up got self up and my sleeves up/ i belive im/ up up and away but they dont want me to stay/ in the game coz my name/ aint slang and i dont slang ye'/ i just see what i say and i say what i see and i see less blow than what get blown away/
I tried alot of times to sit and write a rap but my mind goes blank as the page i'm starein at / so i tear it out taking my anger out on the page/ i want the stage want the fame and cash that go with it / keep the stage the fame i take the cash innit / i'm a cash addict / i need it more now than i did when i had it / took grands for granted through it all in the bin / i cant mask it, thats why it's called a waste paper basket / But, now i'm grindin / Put, the right time in / good now i'm rhymin / tryin'a buy them diamonds / it's a lame shame i must complain the ice in my hand is on my disc cutter mate / i'm this gutter mate / and i just gotta make it / not channel four so i'm not gonna fake it / i'm just gonna flame spit / like a dragon got ya hangin-on/ to my words i'm a wordsmith and i got more words than W.H. Smith So thats that. Any coments? |
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| Posted: 24 Jan 2008 21:57 | ||
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this is alrite for your first attempt, the more you go at it the more your word play will develop. dont try to hard sometimes simplicity is all it needs.
if you get really skilled you'll look back and cringe at your early stuff, trust me i did. but i also learnt from them. __________________ on that shit from early, roll wid boys but im straight up girlie!!! |
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